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This is my 'reading' for Oliver Guy Watkins' ongoing art project "Postcard To Brooke", the idea of which is that people unfamiliar with the poem 'Doubts' by Rupert Brooke read the poem directly to camera for the first time. Since I'd watched a fair number of readings, and was therefore pretty au fait with the poem, I thought I'd interpret it differently.

The lady in the middle is an actress named Ka Cox, for whom the poem was originally written for, and about. The words are all from the poem, except for one particualr exception, and certain phrases are repeated for resonance.

As usual, there's a bigger version if you download.

The original poem is below:

Doubts

When she sleeps, her soul, I know,
Goes a wanderer on the air,
Wings where I may never go,
Leaves her lying, still and fair,
Waiting, empty, laid aside,
Like a dress upon a chair. . . .
This I know, and yet I know
Doubts that will not be denied.

For if the soul be not in place,
What has laid trouble in her face?
And, sits there nothing ware and wise
Behind the curtains of her eyes,
What is it, in the self's eclipse,
Shadows, soft and passingly,
About the corners of her lips,
The smile that is essential she?

And if the spirit be not there,
Why is fragrance in the hair?

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:iconspudpaste:
What an incredible amount of detail, this must have been tedious work :D

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:icongrthink:
I wouldn't call it tedious :D

As with any picture there are times when you wish it could just be done, and they tend to drag, but I wouldn't do it if it weren't in some way fun.

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"Ignorance certainly is bliss, unless you're on fire, in which case ignorance will kill you."
:iconspudpaste:
I just looked through your gallery, you must have a lot of patience :D

But of course a lot of talent as well :thumbsup:

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:icongrthink:
Mostly patience :D

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"Ignorance certainly is bliss, unless you're on fire, in which case ignorance will kill you."
:iconkilifvak:
The Artist has requested Critique on this Artwork
:icongrthink:
I figured while I've got a pid for subscription, I may as well use all the features available. You don't by a TV and only watch one channel. well, maybe you do -- Animal Planet.

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"Ignorance certainly is bliss, unless you're on fire, in which case ignorance will kill you."
:iconkilifvak:
I wasn't mocking you Gareth, I was mocking THE SYSTEM

let's be honest, this critique thing is ridiculous
I can imagine you use it, because well, you got a subscription and all
but nontheless, ridiculous
:icongrthink:
I've got nothing against it, if it works. It's just a way to encourage discussion further than 'Nice shot' or 'Shes sexy'. Saying that, the system itself looks a bit ropey, and you'll just give fanboys/girls extra tools to say 'wow ur amazin' with.

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"Ignorance certainly is bliss, unless you're on fire, in which case ignorance will kill you."
:iconkilifvak:
yeh sure it aint really hurting anyone so far, but it's still silly!

and that's my point, it's silly

critique should be natural and unforced, like the raven in the woods.

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Apr 18, 2009, 11:25:12 PM

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